Based on the following paragraph, compose a text in which you combine a paraphrase with a quote. Add a correct in-text reference!

I don’t know how to handle this English question and need guidance.

Based on the following paragraph, compose a text in which you combine a paraphrase with a quote. Add a correct in-text reference!

In our research work, results demonstrate that academic interaction with teachers and peers have a significant effect on the academic performance of them. We can also conclude from descriptive statistics that students must improve their Study Habits especially give proper time to study per day and revise the lecture notes daily. The present results are supported by the earlier findings by Aluja and Blanch (2004). Moreover; the findings of our research work brings to a close that the better study habits, the higher the academic interaction which ultimately lead to higher academic performance.

The paragraph is from page 262 in the article “A STUDY ON ACADEMIC PERFORMANCE OF UNIVERSITY STUDENTS”. The article was published in 2011 and the authors are Erum Shahzadi and Zahoor Ahmad.

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My own answer(I know I am wrong):

Research of Shahzadi and Ahmad’ s “A STUDY ON ACADEMIC PERFORMANCE OF UNIVERSITY STUDENTS” mentions that the influence of mates eating with the teacher has a great influence on the student’s academic performance. In particular, you can conclude that you need to give a reasonable amount of time per day learning and modify the lecture notes daily, furthermore, better learning habits bring closer to higher academic interactions that lead to higher academic performance(262).

My lecture feedback: You almost have the right idea of how to do it correctly, but the execution is lacking

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