Can anyone check if my Korean Translation matches the Englis

Can anyone check if my Korean Translation matches the English?안녕하세요, 재이름은 데이브세바스치안 이에요. 저는 베프가있어요. 이름의는 져스틴이에요. 져스틴하고저는 취미가 같은있어요. 우리는 교화에서 노래해요.  우리는 음악가하고악단련주했어요. 비슷한이 생각해요. 지옥에가서하고다지 갔어요. 져스친는 막다가 자살했어요. 또저는 관게와 약혼자를 도밨어요. 우리는 통포를 부라요. 우리는 안분리겠어요.Hello, my name is Dave Sebastian. I have a best friend. His name is Justin. Justin and I have the same hobbies. We both sing for church. We both are musicians and were in band. We often think alike. We have been through hell and back. Justin prevented me from commiting suicide. And I helped him in his relationship with his fiance. We call each other brothers. I think we will never be seperated.